This is by far the best advice I've ever received, I will definitely take this into consideration. Your analysis is very well appreciated.
I agree with everything Hoshin said. IMO heâs right on the money. Especially the hands. The white shirt guyâs hand position than Iâm assuming yours. The hand on the stomach is doing nothing for you at all. Itâs making throwing a punch with it far slower too. Keep them both up at head height, elbows close (but not too close) to your ribs. The other guyâs was pretty good, but his fists shouldâve been out a little further.
In addition to what Hoshin said...
1. The biggest thing I saw was your posture. When youâre (both of you) not engaged, your postureâs dine. Once you throw anything or defend anything, youâre both turning too far, bending over too far, and/or going into a fetal position of sorts. Stay upright!!! Not doing so is a great way to get hit with a clean, easy, and hard shot to the head. Turning away and/or down like that is probably the worst thing you can do; youâre giving up way too many targets. If you can only change one thing, this is probably it.
2. Every time either of you punch or kick, youâre dropping your hands, leaving yourselves wide open. Neither of you counter well enough to exploit this, but a better fighter will easily take advantage of that. Theyâll wait until you start your punch, then go in with a fast straight punch to an easy target.
3. Your range is too far away. If youâre going to fight at this range, youâve got to move in and out with your feet. Youâre both reaching way to far to hit each other, resulting in far less power and breaking your posture (just like number 1. here). When youâre reaching that far, quite often your body was turned away from your target, opening up targets, and it seemed like you couldnât even see what you were hitting.
As Hoshin said, it was better than I thought it would be. You seem like good athletes, which is what helped you all more than MA skill IMO.
Please keep at it. Youâve got potential. A teacher will help you live up to that potential far more. And if youâve posted it on YouTube, ignore the idiots.