I just looked at the Wikipedia entry on Aikido and here is what I found by Stanley Pranin
I was just wondering recently what the article on aikido in Wikipedia looked like these days. Many years ago when Wikipedia was just starting, I made a few contributions to their aikido entry, but stopped participating due to lack of time. These days, I try to check it occasionally to see if I think this wonderful resource does justice to the subject.In looking at the entry today, I find that the introductory paragraphs are well done and do a good job of capturing the essence of the art in four short paragraphs.
Further down, in the discussion of the etymology of aikido, Way of combining forces is given as a literal translation of ai-ki-do. I would take issue with this and suggest Way of energy-matching, or something similar, if I would like to be literal. Force is not a good choice to translate ki.
Similarly, the discussion of the term aiki is very superficial and really attempts to describe how the word is used in an aikido context, rather than in martial arts in general as is stated in the article. The subject of aiki is very complex and the term has had different meanings in different martial traditions.
Continuing, the meaning of Osensei is explained using my definition of the term from the Encyclopedia of Aikido as a reference. You will find a lot of information on all aspects of the art if you consult this work.
In the Initial development subsection, the entry describes the martial influences on Morihei Ueshiba in the creation of his art. Daito-ryu Aikijujutsu is mentioned as the core martial art from which aikido derives. This is correct and is at odds with the view espoused by Kisshomaru Ueshiba, Moriheis son, in his many books where he portrays Daito-ryu as one of several technical influences on modern aikido. This is also the position of the Aikikai Hombu Dojo in Tokyo. Further, a long-standing and recurring error in Kisshomarus books that mentions Moriheis study of Kito-ryu jujutsu, rather than Tenjin Shinyo-ryu jujutsu, has been corrected. Good job, Wikipedia!
Next, Wikipedia states aikido derives much of its technical structure from the art of swordsmanship. I think that this subtly suggests that the study of the sword (ken) and other weapons has an important place in aikido training, which was certainly Moriheis view. The Aikikai Hombu Dojo states that weapons are instead auxiliary to taijutsu training, the latter forming the core of aikido techniques. I think Aikido Journals research and publications have heavily influenced the discussion of this very important topic.
The section where Moriheis training and association with Sokaku Takeda in described mentions an end date of 1937 using John Stevens Aikido: The Way of Harmony as the source. This date was taken from one of my articles and Ill bet no one can state why this year is given. I didnt mention the document on which I based this, but will in due course. Kisshomaru would never acknowledge such a late date.
Wikipedia states that it is unclear when Ueshiba began using the name aikido. This is incorrect. My Encyclopedia entry is used as a reference and clearly states that the year is 1942. Interested readers can start with my interview of Minoru Hirai for background information.
The paragraph on Religious influences is very superficial and needs a lot of work. It is one of the most important subjects relating to Moriheis martial odyssey. The sentence the connection with [Onisaburo] Deguchi gave Ueshiba entry to elite political and military circles as a martial artist is an observation I have made for many years, and I believe Aikido Journal is the original source of this view although a difference reference is given.
The independent organizations section is a mess and needs to be entirely rewritten! It is clear to me that the editors whose submissions were used here did not have a good grasp of the subject. You will find accurate information on Aikido Journal if you would like to explore a particular topic in depth. I should probably do an article on this at some stage.
I found the Training section to be pretty well rounded. One observation I have is that the term Shodokan Aikido is used here and in a couple of places in the article. This term is seldom used or understood in the aikido world. Tomiki Aikido is most frequently employed and universally understood.
The section on Criticisms is very interesting to me as a historian. I could tell immediately when I read it that Professor Fumiaki Shishida was one of the sources used. The use of Shodokan Aikido is a dead giveaway. Prof. Shishida is a full professor at Waseda University, one of Japans most prestigious universities. He has written many of the texts on aikido appearing in various martial arts encyclopedias and reference works, both in Japanese and English. His research is top notch and I respect him very much, but he has a tendency to give almost equal weight to Shodokan Aikido (Tomiki Aikido) compared to the mainline style of the Aikikai Hombu Dojo in his writings. This is misleading in the sense that the Tomiki style is one of the smaller groups existing in the aikido world and probably accounts for less than five percent of all practitioners. Keep this in mind because you will run in to this tendency from time to time.
The following paragraph references an editorial I wrote many years ago:
Another criticism is that after the end of Ueshibas seclusion in Iwama from 1942 to the mid 1950s, he increasingly emphasized the spiritual and philosophical aspects of aikido. As a result, strikes to vital points by nage, entering (irimi) and initiation of techniques by nage, the distinction between omote (front side) and ura (back side) techniques, and the practice of weapons, were all deemphasized or eliminated from practice. Lack of training in these areas is thought to lead to an overall loss of effectiveness by some aikido practitioners.
The editor confused my main point which was critical of what I regard as deficiences in modern aikido practice attributing this to Moriheis seclusion in Iwama after the war. Not so. Moriheis aikido had and continued to have all of these missing parts. It was those who came after him, especially Kisshomaru Ueshiba and Koichi Tohei who deemphasized these areas. Its all backwards here!
I have no quibbles with the remaining sections on ki and uniforms.
I counted some 18 references to articles that I have written over the years, and several other attributions to material appearing in Aiki News / Aikido Journal. It is clear that our studies and publications have had a major impact on all areas of aikido research. If you want to understood more clearly what I mean, try to locate an early description of aikido from the 1960s or 70s and you will see how they are vastly different.
Obviously, Wikipedia is a work in progress. I really consider it one of the most important references in the world and I consult it daily. I should probably spend the time to contribute what I think are needed improvements on aikido-related entries. I hope to get around to it someday!