Did I Screw Up?

[SamT]

http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=147813

I'm the one who gave the critique (Nalayah). However, it's been awhile since I've been in the dojang or done any martial arts. Most of that was off of the top of my head, and I'm somewhat afraid of having provided false information. If anyone could post what they think, that would be great.

 

[tshadowchaser]

I would say you where accurate in what you said

 

[SamT]

Thanks, that makes me feel a lot better .

 

[Marginal]

Looks kinda like she's coming in for a 540 or something since she doesn't seem to be anywhere near the ground. I'd give the arms a pass personally just 'cause that kind of thing is typically exaggerated in comics to better imply action. Only way she's going to get hit is if the artist lets her after all.

 

[Jade Tigress]

I think it was a very well thought out critique. The picture itself is very good, the pose is off. You gave her some great pointers.